Evaluation marking

Level 2 8–11 marks
• There is basic skill in the use of digital technology or ICT in the evaluation.
• There is basic understanding of the forms and conventions used in the productions.
• There is basic understanding of the role and use of new media in various stages of the production. • There is basic understanding of the combination of main product and ancillary texts.
• There is basic understanding of the significance of audience feedback.
• There is basic skill in choice of form in which to present the evaluation.
• There is basic ability to communicate.

You manage to show examples of the things you included in your video in evaluation one by using screen shots. You didn't really use many examples from the world of real music videos to back up your points. You did establish codes and conventions. In evaluation 2 you managed to demonstrate a link between your video and other products but you tended just to describe them rather than commenting on the efficacy. Your audience feedback post was a bit confusing in the way you laid it out and it would have been good to have some actual evidence of the feedback. I was worried that your technologies used post was going to just be a list but the podcast at the end really helped.

Ella 11/20

Olivia 10/20

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