Audience feedback

Feedback on our music video
We uploaded our video to the blog. Before doing this we showed people the blog and asked them what they thought of it, they was to state the good things, the bad things and any improvements which were clear that needed to be made. Also, we asked for a rate out of ten for how professional and enjoyable it was.

Here is the feedback we received...

First person
Positives - It was really effective having the different lighting in the past memories.
Negatives - I didn't like the way it had some slow footage and some fast footage.
Improvements - You could've done all of the shots the speed.

Professional - 8/10
Enjoyable - 9/10

Second person
Positives - The things I liked about it was that a variety of different shots.
Negatives - I didn't like the slowness of some of the shots.
Improvements - To improve you could've used some different locations.

Professional - 7/10
Enjoyable - 8/10

Third person

Positives - The thing I liked was that there was a good use of lighting to show the different times.
Negatives - There was a negative point I picked up on which was that it wasn't 100% clear on the artist.
Improvements - An improvement could be that the singer could be brought in at an earlier stage.

Professional - 8/10
Enjoyable - 8/10

Fourth person
Positives - I liked it when the round about shot was displayed as it was different and was effective.
Negatives - It was let down by the long shots, a few were too long and this isn't what a music video does.
Improvements - To improve the video the shots could be fastened up overall on all of them so its constant.

Professional - 7/10
Enjoyable - 8/10

All of the comments we received were constructive criticism and if we was to recreate it, it would help us build an even better music video. We was pleased with the feedback we got on the music video after people had watched it. The positive comments were nice to hear.

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